According to what I read on the newspaper, Rio de Janeiro's government plans to close almost the entire avenue to vehicles, from Candelária Church to Cinelândia, turning it into a huge pedestrian urban area. And not only Rio Branco Avenue would be changed, but also some of the smaller streets nearby, like Rosário, Buenos Aires and Ouvidor Streets.
Of course, traffic routes
This news [has] affected me because I work
I don't believe, either, that reducing the number of buses would help reduce the traffic jams, because I think many people will start to use their cars instead.
Before starting such a huge change, I think government should build new
Esta é uma das várias pequenas redações que fiz durante o meu curso preparatório para o TOEFL. Trechos riscados são os erros originais, seguidos pelas correções feitas pela professora. Trechos entre colchetes são coisas que eu deixei de escrever.